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Sonnet The sonnet rotates around on the figure of a woman ,who asks to her boyfriend to remember her when she will be passed away ; on the other hand if her death will make him sad ,she asks to be forgotten so her memory won't hurt him . The main theme that i found reading this sonnet is focused on the importance of the memory we have of a beloved person ; remembering her/ him is the only way we have to keep her alive in ourselves , but if this memory dosen't let us live ,if it ties down our life we should stop to remind her / him and trying to start a new life. This sonnet has many distinctive stylistic devices, such as anaphora : for instance " Remember me when i'm gone away" in the first line , and" Remember me when no more day by day " in fifth line. Within this stylistic device the author wants to express the will of the girl to be remembered after she has gone away , can't be by his side and can't keep their future plan. In addiction the author wants us to understand how much she loves him .

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The sonnet rotates revolves around on the figure of a woman ,who asks to her boyfriend to remember her when she will be passed passes away ; on the other hand if her death will makes him sad ,she asks to be forgotten so her memory won't hurt him.
The main theme that I found reading this sonnet is focused on the importance of the memory we have of a beloved person ; remembering her/ him is the only way we have to keep her alive in ourselves , but if this memory doesn't let us live, if it ties down our lives we should stop to remind her / him and trying to start a new life.
This sonnet has many distinctive stylistic devices, such as anaphora : for instance "Remember me when I'm gone away" in the first line , and "Remember me when no more day by day " in fifth line. Within this stylistic device the author wants to express the will of the girl to be remembered after she has gone away, can't be by his side, and can't keep their future plan. In addiction addition the author wants us to understand how much she loves him.


Good job! A couple notes: "I" is always capitalized. Also, instead of saying her/him all the time, you can just say "they" to refer to a nonspecific singular person. 

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