writing a story
I'm a chair. As you can see, I'm a very common wooden chair. But I refused to be a chair, I want to be a long spear.Because it can put me in mind of those days when I was a big tree. Once upon a time I was in a large,dense forest……
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writing a story
I'm a chair. As you can see, I'm a very common wooden chair. But I refused to be a chair. I want to be a long spear because it reminds me of those days when I was a big tree. Once upon a time I was in a large, dense forest...* Do not forget a space after any punctuation mark
*Do not start a sentence with "because"
*The suspension dots (...) always go with three
I enjoyed being in your mind :)
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writing a story
I'm a chair. As you can see, I'm a very common wooden chair. But I refused to be a chair, I wanted to be a long spear. Because it reminds me of those days when I was a big tree. Once upon a time I was in a large,dense forest……0
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...with all my friends growing, holding a lot of nests with eggs from different amazing birds in our branch, seeing the sky over our tops and feeling that anything could be larger than us. A terrific day a group of men come to our beautiful place in trucks and others things that making a terrible noise, that noise only could mean one thing... destruction.
I was frightened by the noise...
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Far from being a chair, it seems to me you have a good imaginative mind,
the kind of minds that cannot stay in a piece of wood, neither big nor small.
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