First to here,I'm gald! This is my first time. I'm glad to be here!

I watched a video online and the it told me I can make some foreign friends here; so here I am come. I'm a student and now I'm in on my summer vacation.
These days I'm watched ing the movie 'Room' ROOM recently, which has won an the Oscar nomination.In my opinion view it's a good movie. The movie touched me deeply because Jack and his mom defeat many difficulties and succeed ss to in getting away from the room. When they get free flee, they found  find (that) the biggest problem is the real world they stay  live in rather than the torments in the room. Jack's mother suffered a lot. Luckily, they saved themselves by helping each other.
Otherwise, I have read the book 'Everything I Never Told You'. The author introduction said the writer of the book, Celeste [?Ng?]*, is was famous around the world. Is that true? Is she really a beautiful female writer?

Nice work. It reads well... 

Just watch out for your punctuation: leave a space after  punctuation marks like (.) and (,).

You succeed in getting sth. "John succeeded in getting a new job."

"In my opinion..." and "from my point of view..." are two different phrases. Be careful not to mix them together.

[?Ng?]* I don't what you meant to write here. Perhaps it was a spelling error or typo.

So.. have a look a the errors and re-draft it in your note book. This will help learn and improve your writing. Well done and good luck with your English! ^_^