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This is my English assignment. Topic is "Where would you like to go to spend a vacation? Describe this place and say why you would like to have a holiday there." I have to make short article. I would like to go to Hawaii in the summer. There are 6 islands each islands have good place. If I could go to Hawaii, I would like to go all islands. Then I would see nature, eat fruits and do surfing. Especially, I would like to go to Oahu land because there is the most famous sightseeing place which is called Diamond head. I could do hiking to top of Diamond head and overlook Waikiki beach. It would be great summer vacation. Thank you for reading.

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This is my English assignment.

The topic is "Where would you like to go to spend a vacation? Describe this place and say why you would like to have a holiday there." I have to make a short article.

I would like to go to Hawaii during the summer. There are 6 islands, where each islands all have good places to visit. If I could go to Hawaii, I would like to go all the islands. I would like to see nature, eat fruits, and surf. Most importantly, I would like to go to the Oahu land because it has the most famous sightseeing place, which is known as the Diamond head. I could hike to the top of the Diamond head, and observe the Waikiki beach from there. It would be great summer vacation.

Thank you for reading.

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