A leisure-time activity you really enjoy. How did you get started? Why do you enjoy it so much? DANCING SAVED MY LIFE When I was fifteen my father died. I was depressed and I didn't want to go out of

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A leisure-time activity you really enjoy. How did you get started? Why do you enjoy it so much? DANCING SAVED MY LIFE When I was fifteen my father died. I was depressed and I didn't want to go out of home. I suffered anxiety attacks and only went out for going to the gym, where a woman started to give latin rhythms lessons. First of all, I hadn't a clue about those dances. I had curiosity so I took up to attend lessons. I learnt about latin rhythms such as what they are and how they dance... Surprisingly, I found out that I danced amazing! Although my sadness didn't disappear, little by little, I improved thanks to I was distracted with an activity that I enjoyed doing it. I began to go out at the weekend with my gym's partners and dance. I enjoyed due to I love the music and I amused a lot dancing. I think it helped to get ahead. I finished being a dance's teacher in an academy. I touch to dance to other people during four years. Nowadays, I go on dancing as a hobby and I feel excited whenever I dance.

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A leisure-time activity you really enjoy. How did you get started? Why do you enjoy it so much?

DANCING SAVED MY LIFE

When I was fifteen, my father died. I was depressed and I didn't want to go out of home. I suffered from anxiety attacks and only went out for going to go to the a gym where a woman started to give me Latin rhythms lessons classes.

First of all, I hadn't At first, I had no clue about those dances, but I had curiosity so I took up to attend the classes (or "started to attend to the classes"). I learnt about Latin rhythms, such as what they are and how they are danced...

Surprisingly, I found out that I danced amazing! Although My sadness didn't disappear, although, little by little, I improved was getting better thanks to I was being distracted with an the activity that I enjoyed doing it.

I began to go out at the weekend with my gym's partners and dance. I enjoyed it due to I love the music my love of music, so I amused dancing a lot. I think it helped to get ahead (or "to get over my anxiety").

I finished ended up being a dance teacher in an academy. I touch to taught dances to other people during four years.

Nowadays, I go on dancing as a hobby and I feel excited whenever I dance.

DANCING SAVED MY LIFE

When I was fifteen my father died. I was depressed and I didn't want to go out of home leave my house. I suffered from anxiety attacks and only went out for going to go to the gym, where a woman started to give lLatin rhythms lessons.

First of all, I hadn't a clue about those types of dances. I had curiosity was curious so I took up to attend lessons decided to take some classes. I learnt (learnt is more colloquial learned is the proper form) about lLatin rhythms such as what they are and how they dance...people dance to them.

Surprisingly, I found out that I danced amazingly! Although my sadness depression didn't disappear, little by little bit by bit, I improved thanks to I was being distracted with an activity that which(This a minor mistake and something that you could definitely get away with in the exam but instead of that, in this case, it would be which) I enjoyed doing it.

I began to go out at the weekend with my gym's and dance partners and dance. I enjoyed it due to the fact that I love the music and I amused a lot by dancing. I think it helped me to get ahead.

I finished ended up (being) becoming a dance's teacher in an academy. I touch taught to dance dancing to other people during for four years.

Nowadays, I dance as a hobby and I feel happy whenever I dance.

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I need to people correct my writing because I have to pass B2 exam (first) this month and these writing are exams' topics. Thanks

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