Help me with the correction please How important is it for people to have hobbies? I would like them to see this essay and tell me if it has some mistakes. Thanks! According with a study of humans behaviour is a fact that one of the things which has a lot of importance in free-time is have a hobby. But, why hobbies are important for us? Along the time is well known which this activities help to relieve stress. Some people like playing videogames, read magazines or books, others prefer do creative activities for example, take a ride by car to anywhere or visit strange places, but all hobbies have in common that make us happier. On the other hand you have to physicians recommend doing exercise or some sport in free-time to be healthier, nevertheless, people do not want or prefer carry out other activity. Overall, I agree with hobbies are really important along the life because perform one part of our day and they help to stay in focus when you are doing other activity, with regard to physicians I coincide that excercise is necesary to be healthier but I discard this kind of activity like hobby for some people, I think (can i discard "that"?) exercise needs to be obligatory and be taken like hobby for the people who do( could be "does"?) not like.