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Sake and beautiful skin I like to drink alcohols. I usually drink japanes"Sake"everynight. Sake is made of rice. Sake is said that it is good for skin. So, People who live in a Regional where makes good Sake have beautiful skin.

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Sake and beautiful skin

I like to drink alcohols.
I usually drink japanes"Sake"everynight.

Almost every night I drink Japanese Sake.

Sake is alcohol made of from rice.
Sake is said that it is to be good for skin.
So, Ppeople who live in a Regional regions where makes good Sake is made
have beautiful skin.

Note: "Made of . . ." is usually correct. But in this case, "made from" sounds better. 

それが本当であれば、私は美しい肌を持っているでしょう!!!

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Sake and beautiful skin

I like to drink alcohol. You can say "I like to drink beers" or "I like to drink beer," but you CANNOT say "I like to drink alcohols."
I usually drink Japanese "Sake" every night. You can also say "I usually drink a Japanese alcohol called "Sake" every night"
Sake is made of rice.
Sake is said to be good for the/your skin. You can also say "It is said that sake is good for the/your skin"
So, people who live in a region that makes good Sake have beautiful skin.

面白い作文ですよ。酒は肌にいい飲み物のことを知らなかった。綺麗な肌のために、週に何回ぐらい、そしてどれくらい酒を飲みますか?もし私は毎日酒を一口飲んだら、私の肌がすぐに若くなる可能性があるか? どう思う? 笑

This is an interesting entry. I had not heard about Japanese Sake being good for the skin. In order to get beautiful skin, how many times a week and how much Sake do you drink? If I were to chug Sake everyday, is there a possibility that I quickly get young looking skin? What do you think?



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