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My dream house (correct me ) , when I was child I wish if I had a cottage in the forest maybe or house on the tree in isolated area and I dreamed that I will live alone in this house and I will have a friends from animals insects and birds it was my biggest dream but year after year when I start to grow up my thoughts and dreams begin to change I live now in a big house in my country with my family it has a small garden and it consist of 2 floor in this moment I dream house which I can live in it alone too but my vision of this house is different now I imagine my house like it was small and consist of three rooms , big kitchen , big balcony and small hall the balcony full of flowers , plants and swing in my house the most of things will be white I love this color my kitchen will be the most important part of this house I love cooking and making new recipes and it will be white too and all things on it will organize carefully , I wish if I have a small library in my house with a nice seat beside it to I can read my books I wish my house will be in a good view which I can relax and in the same time make me feel live and movement of people I think it will be pretty amazing house my dream house where are you I miss you :D .

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My dream house,

When I was child, I wished that I had a cottage in the forest.  Or, maybe a house in a the tree in an isolated area .  I dreamt that I lived alone in this house, and I will have had  friends from :animals, insects, and birds.  It was my biggest dream, but year after year, when I start to grow as I grew up, my thoughts and dreams begin began to change.  Now, I live in a big house in my country with my family.  It has a small garden, and it consists of 2 floors.


in this moment, my dream house is one in which I can live in it alone. too But, my vision of this house is different now.  I imagine my dream house like itto be was small and consist of three rooms: big kitchen , big balcony and small a hall (A hall isn't really a room so I wouldn't list it, but I just left it in there.)   The balcony  would be full of flowers and plants; it would also have a swing set.  (Full of flowers and plants make sense, but full of swings does not, so I split it into two separate phrases.)



In my dream house, the most of things will be white.  I love this colorthe color white (It's odd to talk about the color white and then say "this color." ).  My kitchen will be the most important part of this house.  I love cooking and making new recipes. It will be white too.  All the things in it will organized carefully.  I would also like if I have a small library in my house, with a nice seat beside inside it toso that I can read my books.


I wish my house will be in would have a good view which I   so that I can relax and in the same time  simultaneously make me feel alive.  and movement of people   (Don't know what you're trying to say here?)
I think it will be a pretty amazing house, my dream house, where are you?  I miss you :D .

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