Writing Task One on IELTS
The graph provides daily need of electricity in England during winter and summer. The pie chart indicates how British people use the electricity.
Generally, the demand for electricity in winter was twice the units of electricity used in summer. In winter, electricity was consumed quickly at 10 p.m., more than 40,000 units, while the hightest figure for this, as much as 20,000, was at 2 p.m. in summer.Throughout 8 to 9 a.m., there is a decrease both in winter and in summer, with 30,000 units and over 10,000 units respectively.
The electricity in England was primarily used for giving heat to the house. And a less proportion of this, about 17.5%, was for kitchen machines, such as ovens, kettles, etc. The usage of entertainment appliance took up 15% on the whole, same as the amount of elecrticity consumed by some electric tools.
To summarise, British people used more electricity in winter especially at night, and they commonly consumed it by increasing the temperature in houses.
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