What i desire about my job
Hey guys,I am IvyFung.I am a graduate and my major is Chinese Education.Like the youngsters in China,I am going to find a job.To find a job I like or to find a job i never know abou it ,becomes a bother in my mind.Sometimes I understand ,as a younger,I have right to chanllege the chanllege.While you repaire this essay,could you tell me about your idea about hunting for job?
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What I desire about my job (Maybe a better title would be: "What I am looking for in a job")
Hey guys, I am my name is Ivy Fung. I am a graduate and my major is Chinese Education. Like the youngsters other young people in China, I am going to find a job. To find a job I like or to find a job i never know abou it ,becomes a bother in my mind. Sometimes I understand ,as a younger,I have right to chanllege the chanllege. While you repaire correct this essay, could you tell me about your ideas about hunting for job for finding a job you like?Tips:
1) Put a space after every comma and full stop
2) Some of the corrections are more stylistic than strictly grammatical. e.g:
i) "my name is..." is better than saying "I am..."
ii) No one really says "youngsters"
3) I don't quite understand the highlighted portion. Do you mean that you are worried about being unable to find a job you like?
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