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Letter to a friend (Correct me, please) Hello Everyone, First , I'd like to say that I love to communicate through letters, I think it's the best way to express feelings, less robotic, more real. Sometimes some friends receive a letter from me, where I expressed my opinion about something or just want to know about him, if there any news. Dear friend, I was here alone and thinking what to say, the truth is that I still don't know what to say, but I will find the best words to express myself. I remember when I met you, everything flowed with ease, we talked for a few hours, and I felt like I met you for years and years, uh... that day was born a big friendship. So much time has passed, many moments, many parties, lots of laughs and many drinks. Madness. Now, I can't get these memories out of my mind, but I have finally seen the end, and I have finally realized; the friendship is over. I hope that you forgive me for my words, but I was wrong, may you believe me? 5 years ago you was my best friend, today you're a stranger. We aren't a Bon Jovi's Song. That's all folks! Cya

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** I'm just correcting the letter part, since I'm assuming that's what you want corrected!

Dear friend,

I was here alone and was thinking about what to say; the truth is that I still don't know what to say, but I will try to find the best words I can to express myself. I remember when I met you; everything flowed with ease, we talked for a few hours, and I felt like I'd known you for years and years, uh... that day a big friendship was born.

So much time has passed; many moments, many parties, lots of laughs and many drinks. Madness. Now, I can't get these memories out of my mind, but I have finally seen the end, and I have finally realized: the friendship is over.

I hope that you can forgive me for my words, but I was wrong, will you believe me? 5 years ago you were my best friend. Today, you're a stranger.

We aren't a Bon Jovi song.
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Thak you, Bluerain. Yeah Lew, he is it
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readding your letter,i feel happy.my english is not good,but i can known your means,thank you.
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I agree, letters is a good way to express feelings. and I guess your friend is a ordinary friends, lol

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