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My English Diary 6.26 2016 (No.5)
Today I attended that an "Enjoy eat and drink for kochi food and sake" event Today.(高知の食と酒を楽しむ会)
They had There were cute two rabbits there!
I had amazing time.
The cuisine was made prepared by Japanese woman shef chef.
I respect was very impressed by her.
楽しくて面白いです!It's very hard to translate 高知の食と酒を楽しむ会. I think I would make it something more simple, like "An Evening of Kochi Food and Drink" or something similar. (I just read something about Shikoku a few weeks ago. I've never been to Japan, but Shikoku sounds especially beautiful).
"Chef" がフランス語です。So we spell it "ch" even though we pronounce it "sh."
"I respect her" usually means that you know this person well. It it is someone you just met, "impressed" is a better word.
Most of the things I changed are just stylistic choices.
I hope this helps.
My English Diary 6.26 2016 (No.5)
I attended that "Enjoy eat and drink for kochi food and sake"Today.
「高知」は何ですか?高知県ですか?
高知の食と酒を楽しむ会 = A party with food and drink from Kochi prefecture. It was a lot of fun.
楽 = fun.
楽しむ = It was a lot of fun. / I had a lot of fun.
会 = Party
誕生日会 = Birthday party
新年会 = New years party
飲み会 = Drinking party
Today I attended a party with food and drink from Kochi prefecture. It was a lot of fun.
(高知の食と酒を楽しむ会)
There were two cute rabbits ! (cute two => two cute)
I had an amazing time.
The cuisine food was made by Japanese woman chef.
食べ物 = Food
飲み物 = Drink
"Japanese woman chef" 僕はわかります、でも it sounds odd, it's too much in one sentence.
In the sentence below you say "her" so I removed "woman" from the sentence above.
I respect was very impressed by her. (僕はSteveさんに同意する)
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