A short holiday
Today, i come back my hometown to visit my family. They live in a small city that is far from my university so i usually spend about 6 hours for waiting to go home . There was a strong rain during that time so streets are very marshy. When i just arrived, i took a bus to get home soon. i was really happy due to meeting my younger sisters. i didn't meet them for a long time. They change a lot. They're higher than before and they are also noisier When they saw me they called my name and then running beside me to hug me. I missed them so much. They have stared telling me everything which occurred before that. the youngest sister told me that her sisters bullied her also other people explained with me. My house become noisier everyday. My parents knew i would go home today so they prepared a abundant meal with a lot of foods and drinks which i like eating. I eat too much so i am full. I just stay here within 3 days so i will enjoy this time with my family . I will help my mother clean my house and teach my sisters .
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A short holiday
Today, I come came back to my hometown to visit my family. They live in a small city that is far from my university so i usually spend about 6 hours getting there for waiting to go home . There was a strong rain during that time so streets are very muddy marshy. When I just arrived, I took a bus to get home soon. I was really happy due to meeting see my younger sisters. i didn't meet see them for a long time. They changed a lot. They're higher taller than before and they are also noisier. When they saw me they called my name and then running beside ran to me to hug me. I missed them so much. They have started telling me everything which has been going on occurred before that. the youngest sister told me that her sisters bullied her and also other people explained with me. My house become noisier every day. My parents knew I would go home today so they prepared an abundant meal with a lot of foods and drinks which I like eating. I eat too much so I am full stuffed. I just stay here within for only 3 days so I will enjoy this time with my family . I will help my mother clean my house and teach my sisters .We meet new people and new friends and new companions - but we see our old friends and family. Only way you "meet" a little sister is first time after they are born.
If you are full, you have eaten enough: if you are stuffed, you are over-full :)
Abundant is a bit awkward, but you could also use extravagant instead. The word abundant or plentiful or bountiful refers to the harvest being very good and producing a table of many things to eat.
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A short holiday
Today,I came back to my hometown to visit my family. They live in a small city that is far from my university so I usually spend about 6 hours for waiting to go home . There was a downpour during that time so streets were very marshy. When I just arrived, i took a bus to get home soon.I was really happy due to meeting my younger sisters.I haven't meet them for a long time. They have changed a lot. They're higher than before and they are also noisier When they saw me they called my name and then ran to me and hugged me. I missed them so much. They started telling me everything which happened before that.The youngest sister told me that her sisters had bullied her also other people explained with me(?). My house becomes noisier everyday. My parents knew I would go home today so they prepared a abundant(the word is not suitable) meal with a lot of foods and drinks which I like eating. I ate too much so I was full. I just stay here within 3 days so I will enjoy this time with my family . I will help my mother clean my house and teach my sisters .Want to progress faster?
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