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Next year I'll buy a house Next year I would like to buy a new house. Now I'm working in a clothe' shop so I'm save some money for I buy a house. Every month deposit 300 euros in my bank account but maybe I will have to ask for a loan because I haven't enough money for it. Although my parents told me that if I need money they could lend to me, but I prefer to save it. The down payment is 10% of the total, so I believe could buy it next year. I have to take a lot of paperwork. It's horrible for me! In this society, younger people have several problem for they pay a mortage because the bank ask to have a well job and be fixed in the job. But that is impossible in Spain currently. There are little job and young people are going to other countries which are better that here, because this situation is maddening for all people. Yesterday, London signature the independence so many spanish people who work in London will have to return to Spain and to live with her parents.

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Next year I'll buy a house

Next year I would like to buy a new house. Now I'm working in a clothes shop so I'm save saving some money for I to buy a house.

Every month I deposit 300 euros in my bank account but maybe I will(I might) have to ask for a loan because I haven't got enough money for it. Although my parents told me that if I need money they could lend to me, but I prefer to save it. The down payment is 10% of the total, so I believe I could buy it next year. I have to take do/complete a lot of paperwork. It's horrible for me!

In this society, younger people have several problems: for they must pay a mortgage because the bank ask(demand/require) you to have a well good job and be fixed in the this job (a permanent employee). But that is currently impossible in Spain currently. There are little few jobs and young people are going to other countries which are better that than here, because this situation is maddening for all people.

Yesterday, London signature the independence the UK voted to leave the European Union so many Spanish people who work in London will have to return to Spain and to live with her their parents.

A very well written piece. I understood everything and you only made small errors. As well as my corrections I have provided suggestions in brackets for better phrases to use.

Well done!

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