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The culture gaps between the Philippines and Japan / last:
I posted six notes, but these are some of differences.
However, the Philippines shares some similarities with Japan. on many points (This part is not needed because "simularities" can replace "points".)
Some of this is just to complain, but it’s honestly my impression. You can say, "...but its my honest impression. Either way will work.)
Another volunteer said, “Who knows which country has a better way of life, it can’t be said easily." (When talking about life, you can say "lifestyle" or the expression "way of life" because the word "life" is too general.)
Now, I can say one that I’m happy living (we use "to live" when time is not known.) in the Philippines. Sometimes, I feel hard and annoying annyoyed with communication when I am unable to can’t do speak according to my intention.
I’m learning that the human happiness depends on the individual, and the world has a rich sense of value throughout this volunteer work. I have come to realize that I had a fixed idea, and I have learned a diversified perspective from this experience.
The completed version:
The culture gaps between the Philippines and Japan / last:
I posted six notes, but these are some of differences.
However, the Philippines shares some similarities with Japan.
Some of this is just to complain, but it’s honestly my impression.
Another volunteer said, “Who knows which country has a better way of life, it can’t be said easily."
Now, I can say that I’m happy living in the Philippines. Sometimes, I feel annyoyed with communication when I am unable to speak according to my intention.
I’m learning that the human happiness depends on the individual, and the world has a rich sense of value throughout this volunteer work. I have come to realize that I had a fixed idea, and I have learned a diversified perspective from this experience.
I hope this helps. Please feel free to ask questions!
James
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