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Mexico flagJAVIER LOAL
the happiness the happpiness usually go hand in hand together whit satisfaction and joy the men and women are happiniess always have longer life it is a well the people nedds to be happy to live the complete armony thoug so much people si hard live in harfmony couse not control its your filing and nedd have tolerance and know drive your filing cont the seconds the moment that the pepole sad im recommend to do exercise to relax the body and thus control their filings

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Happiness

Happiness usually goes hand in hand together with satisfaction and joy. Men and women who are happy always have longer lives. It is good. People need to be happy to live in complete harmony, though so many people have hard, unharmonious lives, because they do not control their feelings and lack tolerance and don't know what drives their feelings. Count the seconds, the moments that people are sad. I recommend to do exercise to relax the body and that way you can learn to control your emotions.


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Hi Javier. Remember to use fullstops and start new sentences when you finish an idea. When you read in English, take note of where sentences end and begin, so you can emulate the writing style.

Have a good day.


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