Just watched a video that talk about OCD（obsessive-compulsive disorder ）
Just watched a video that talk about OCD（obsessive-compulsive disorder ）
OCD is not only shows people it looks like,particular things、keep something in order、excessive perfectionist，it also brings people fear、anxiety、terror 、guilt and so on。The essential feature of the disorder is recurrent obsessional thoughts or compulsive act that repugnant to person who thinks themselves and lead to try get rid of these unwanted thoughts.The video has mention that OCD might a kind of behavioural addiction,shows a lack of flexible thinking.
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Just watched a video that talked about OCD（obsessive-compulsive disorder ）
I just watched a video that talked about OCD（obsessive-compulsive disorder .）The OCD video showed people and their behavior and what it looks like, such as keeping something in order or being an excessive perfectionist. OCD also brings people suffering from it, fear, anxiety, terror, guilt and so on.The essential feature of the disorder is recurrent obsessional thoughts or compulsive acts that are repugnant to the person and those people that live with them. It is difficult to try get rid of these unwanted thoughts.The video mentioned that OCD might be a kind of behavioural addiction, showing a lack of flexible thinking.
******Hi Maggie
I had to change some of your sentences because the OCD topic was difficult to write about since it was scientific. I tried to keep your main thoughts.
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I just watched a video that talk about OCD（obsessive-compulsive disorder ）
I just watched a video that talked about OCD （obsessive-compulsive disorder ）OCD is not only shows people it looks like a behaviour about how things appear or their surface appearance, but its about particular thought processes things,、about the urge to keep something in order,、excessive perfectionism t，it is also about what brings people fear,、anxiety,、terror, 、guilt and so on。The essential feature of the disorder is a recurrent obsessional thought(s) or a compulsive act that might be repugnant to a person, who thinks themselves which the person often dwells on for long periods and leads to them trying to get rid of these unwanted thoughts. The video has also mentions that OCD might be a kind of behavioural addiction, shows showing a lack of mental flexiblity thinking.
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