story in my mind
first part:
the little boy was staying under the tree when his mother called him to bring the water and gives it to old horse, in this moment roze was beside the windows looked him and smiling.
john lives in small vilage called the green hill.
this is first time i try to write story by english,i will continue my story in the next time :)
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The story in my mind
first part:The little boy was staying under the tree when his mother called him to bring the water and gives it to the old horse. At this moment the roze was beside the windows was looking at him and smiling.
John lives in small vilage called the Green Hill.
This is the first time i try to write story in english,i will continue my story in the next time :)
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