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Brazil flagAilton Queiroz
Weather is down Yesterday was very cold in my City, today is better the weather is less cold than yesterday, but a few minutes ago I was watching tv and the report of the weather told that tomorrow will be very cold, because rain in the south of Brazil, normally when occurred the temperature down. This fall is very cold e the next month, winter is coming and most people speak that this winter will be most cold the last 30 years.

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Weather is down

Yesterday was very cold in my city. Today is better. The weather is less cold than yesterday (or you can also sa: The weather is warmer compared to yesterday), but a few minutes ago, when I was watching tv and the report of the weather weather report said told that tomorrow will be very cold because of the rain in the  from south of Brazil. Normally when this occurrs the temperature goes down. This fall is very cold e the next month (sorry I don't understand what you want to say from this phrase) , winter is coming and most people (instead of most people you can use: a lot of people) speak are saying  that this winter will be the coldest in most cold the last 30 years.



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Eliana, em primeiro lugar gosto muito da lingua inglesa acredito que em qualquer situação sempre acrescenta algo principalmente para nós brasileiros, tenho interesse em aprender para melhor colocação profissional e também para lazer, cultura, futuras viagens ao exterior, atualmente faço por ccnta própria, e confesso é dificil, mas pega-se uma dica aqui e ali, aprendo um pouco a cada dia, qualquer dica sempre será util, conta com sua ajuda também porque não..rs obrigado pela atenção.
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Hi Ailton, I'm Brazilian too but I'm living in Calgary Canada since last year. I've prepared for the official exams of English proficiency and it is very difficult... rs. Someone expert in English will correct your text but I saw that you use the comma "," before "because" and "but". I think it is because we use the comma before "porque" and "mas" in Portuguese. Do you have any purpose for learning English? Eliana
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