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I try to write as easy sentence as i can. Today i am trying to use present simle only:Usually i get up at 7 o clock on day out. I love the coffee in the morning, and i like when i have more free time in the morning too. Nowadays the sunrise starts early, i think at 4 or 5 o clock. After breakfast i check my emails and go to do some English exercises. I like to watch movies and I am film fan, but not a movie theater goer. So i dont often go to movie theater. I am interested in very large range of different movie types. But i dont like tv shows, except when they are comedy, like the "Friends" series and so on. What tv shows do you like? The main reason why i dont like tv shows is that they are too similar. As i can see it, tv shows have plots that are too common. The most popular plot line in tv series, in my opinion, is that a person who has big problems communicating with other people, and thereby he has problems with social adaptation. But on another hand, this person can have unnatural abilities, which can make him adored by everybody. The most common ability is that this person is a genius who can urivel(?) solve/unravel every crime.
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Hope this helps,overall it was really good but english is fickle in tense and grammer, and there are some terms that are used more than other such as movie theater vs cinema
Not bad ... Remember to capitalize I and use the apostrophe (') when using contraction.
Usually I get up at 7 o’clock on my day off. I love coffee in the morning. I like when I have more free time in the morning. I think the sunrise starts at 4 or 5 o’clock. After breakfast I check my email and do some English exercises. I like to watch movies. I am a film fan, but not a movie goer. So i don’t often go to the cinema. I am interested in a very large range of movie types. But I don’t like TV series, except comedy. I like TV series like "Friends.” Which TV series do you like? The main reason why I don’t like TV series is because they are all similar. As I see it there are few conceptions of it. In my opinion the most popular conception is a person has a lot of problems communicating with people, and hereby has a problem with social adaptation. But on the other hand, this person may have any unnatural abilities, which makes him adored by everybody. The common ability is - this person is just genius who can unravel any crime.
Hope this helps ...
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