Hi everyone. I am writer and comic book artist. Hello my friends, This is a pleasure to talk with you all. My name is Robespierre, I'm from Brazil and I'm beginner level in English. I'm writer and comic book artist. I need help to check my English where I am wrong (I will stay so happy with the help of you all friends :D!). As I'm a writer, I will put in my notebook something short stories that I wrote. This will help me so much and if you all need to my help, I am here. :) This short story is called: Soliloquim Okay... let's write (hahah :D). More days, more lifes. In out side the peoples already awakened, others nor slept. More life, more peoples, more days... more lies. Lies. They're what make us live peacefully, be with our friends, family or even that MAYBE love. But, why need us of the lies for live, for us to be happy? I wonder if in just 24 hours the entire planet talk just trues? What would be the next minute? A punch in face? A tear? The end of a marriage? Or... An new nuclear holocaust? Therefore we are alone in us. With this, the death of love...? To be continued... ------------------------------------- Hey my friends, I hope which you all can help me with this, Also I hope you enjoy it, of the my short story. Thanks very VERY much for help. Cheers my friends. Pierre