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Digital and computer technology have enormously changed people’s lives. People use new technology everyday and for many, it is difficult to imagine living without it. Nowadays, almost everyone has a mobile phone, a computer or a tablet. But how have these devices influenced people in their everyday lives? Has the influence been good or bad? Well, this last question is difficult to answer and I shouldn’t generalise, so in my opinion computer technology has influenced people both negatively and positively.
Firstly, new technology has changed the way we communicate with other people. Only a few decades ago[,] the only way possible to communicate with others was by telephone or letter. Sending a letter by mail was much slowing than using the telephone, but it was also more personal. Telephones were connected inside the houses (can you explain what you want to say with this phrase?) and the majority of families couldn’t afford one, so they had to go to someone’s house to make a call. Indeed, making a call was faster than sending a letter, but you didn’t have as much privacy. However, Now everyone owns a mobile phone, so you don’t need to share it with anyone and be worried about worry about whether someone is listening in on/eavesdropping on your conversation. Also, you can carry it anywhere and send messages or make calls whenever you want.
Secondly, another advantage of computer technology is being able to shop online and to have a huge variety of services at your fingertips/have access to a large variety of services. That means you can usually get things cheaper, faster and easier than in by shopping in person. Online companies typically have lower costs and it is reflected on the price. You (just to be consistent; you've been using 2nd person for the whole paragraph) can also avoid the long check-out lines.
To summarise, in my opinion Digital and computer technology have made it easier to buy things and to communicate with family and friends, or communicate through devices at least, because One thing you notice nowadays is that people often talk on the phone instead of having a face-to-face conversation. It is difficult to say whether the influence of technology is good or bad, so it is better to let everyone decide the kind of lifestyle they want for themselves.(your English was correct--this is just another option, a little more formal than what you wrote. I'm assuming this is a formal essay)
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