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The environment of your village Hi, guy, I need some help. I'll have a short English speaking tomorrow about topic: talk about the environment . Here is my report. Please, help me fix the mistakes and add more ideas. Hi guy, my name is H. With the topic today, I have a lot of things to say Coming up here today, I have no hidden agenda, I have to tell you that the environment actually become a serious problem of human. So, what is the environment? It's the natural surrounding us such as: air, soil, ocean, forest, river,...Our life depends on the things that the environment gives us. We have beautiful beaches, the rainforest, the fresh air. But, what is the environment recieves from us? The answer is more and more bad things like garbage, pollution,..They make the environment become worse everyday. Let's start from the ocean.You know, the ocean is water, is the most of this planet. Every stream, every cloud and every rain drop, it's all come back to the ocean. It's the source of all the living things in the Earth. Human is not different. The ocean gives us the valuable things: aqualatics, salt, crudle oil and living. But, look, what we do with our immense mother? We take, but not share. We poison her by garbage, plastic, scum oil,...You'd know, if she gets angry and covers this planet again, we are surely die. What's about the forest? it's also has the same fate. We take its trees for our wood, its plants for our medicine and its beauty for our relaxation. Humen, they're so greedy and idiot. They forget that people don't make air, we live depend on the air from trees. It's true, and never change. Human should be change. If it goes on, in the future, our children may not see the beautiful things that we saw.So, to protect the environment we should reduce the plastic bags, bottles and cans. Remember save paper, we can save the trees in forest, that mean we can reduce the land pollution. It would be better if you go to work or school by bike or walk, we cdan save energy and keep the air cleaner. Or you can reuse and recycle things, don’t burn trash and we should plan trees. This is the best way to reduce the air pollution. And I think we should not throw trash into the water, don’t catch the animals by electronic shock, the factories should not waste toxic or smoke to the natural. Do these things we will protect the environment, we will protect our life. Look, killing the environment, we are killing our life.

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The environment of your village

Hi, guy, I need some help. I'll have a short English speaking tomorrow about topic: talk about the environment . Here is my report. Please, help me fix the mistakes and add more ideas.

Hi guys, my name is H.  Coming up here today, I have a lot of things to say for this topic, I have no hidden agenda (could you explain what you want to say here?), I have to tell you that the environment actually become a serious problem of humanity.
So, what is the environment? It's the natural surrounding us such as: air, soil, ocean, forest, river...Our life depends on the things that the environment gives us. We have beautiful beaches, the rain-forest, the fresh air. But, what is the environment receives from us? The answer is more and more bad things like garbage and pollution.They make the environment become worse everyday.
Let's start from the ocean.You know, the ocean is water,  covers most of this planet. Every stream, every cloud and every rain drop, it's all comes back to the ocean. It's the source of all the living things in on the Earth. Humans is are not (here I would suggest that you put 'any' to make the sentence flow better) different. The ocean gives us the valuable things: aquatics, salt, crude oil and life. But, look, what we do with our immense mother? We take, but do not share. We poison her by garbage, plastic, scum oil...You know, if she gets angry and covers this planet again, we are will surely die.
What about the forest? it's also has the same fate. We take its trees for our wood, its plants for our medicine and its beauty for our relaxation. Humans (I understand that man goes to men, woman to women, but the word 'human' doesn't work the same way, hence the horrible English language), they're so greedy and idiotic. They forget that people don't make air,  our lives depend on the air from trees.This has always been true. Humans should change.
If it goes on, in the future, our children may not see the beautiful things that we saw. So, to protect the environment we should reduce the littering of plastic bags, bottles and cans. Remember save paper, we can save the trees in forest, which means that we can reduce the land pollution. It would be better if you go to work or school by bike or even walk, so we can save energy and keep the air cleaner. Or you can reuse and recycle things, don’t burn trash.Plant trees. This is the best way to reduce the air pollution. And I think we should not throw trash into the water, don’t catch the animals by electronic shock, the factories should not waste toxic or smoke to the natural(-.- I'm confused). Doing these things we will protect the environment, we will protect our life.
Look, killing the environment, we are killing our lives.

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