My first Essay
Hello,
This is my first essay, hopefully, in a series of multiple essays to improve my writing skills. I will start writing, about my main motivation to improve my writing skills. Last week I presented a document written in english language to be honest I wrote it very fast and without doing any review. I received a honest feedback about my work, and in summary they recommended me to take lessons and try to write in english language as little as possible.
I hope this kind of essays will give me more confidence and practice to improve my writing.
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My first Essay
Hello,This is my first essay, hopefully, in a series of multiple (Since you've said it's a series, which has to include more than one, you don't have to say that there are multiple ones.) essays to improve my writing skills. I am going to write will start writing about my main motivation to improve my writing skills. Last week I presented a document written in English. language To be honest, I wrote it very quickly fast and without doing any review. I received a honest feedback about my work, and in summary they recommended that I me to take lessons and try to write in English language as little as possible.
I hope this kind of essays will give me more confidence and practice in order to improve my writing.
** Good job! Your errors are very minor. Keep up the good work!
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My first essay
This is my first essay, hopefully, in a series of multiple essays to improve my writing skills. I will start writing about my main motivation for improving (a little more natural sounding) my writing skills. Last week, I presented a document written in English. To be honest, I wrote it very fast and without doing any review. I received honest feedback about my work, and in summary they recommended I take lessons and try to write in English as little as possible.
I hope this kind of essay will give me more confidence and practice for improving (or "to improve") my writing.
(mostly it's just small odd grammar things but good start)
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