Today
Today I wake up at 10 A.M.. And then I went to big market. It's too big!
After watching many goods, we were hungry. So we ate Pork Cutlet. It is very delicious.
We come back our dormitory.
Today is too tired.
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Today
Today I wake up at 10 A.M, and then I went to (a) big market (place). It's too (it was so) big!After watching many goods(a lot of the products) we were (i was )hungry. So we (i decided to )ate (eat)Pork Cutlet. It is very (was) delicious.
We come back ( I retouned to) our (my) dormitory.
Today is too tired. (it was a tiring day)
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Today
Today I wake up at 10 A.M.. And then I went to big market. It's too big!
After watching many goods, we were hungry. So we ate Pork Cutlet. It is very delicious.
We come back our dormitory.
Today is too tired.
Today I woke up at 10am. Then I went to a very big market. We were hungry after looking at many goods, so we ate pork cutlets, they were delicious! Then we went back to our dormitory. Today was tiring.
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Today
Today I wake (用past tense，因为已经过去了) up at 10 A.M.. And (一个” . “而已) then I went to big market（少了量词）. It's too big!After watching（用于 moving things, 例如 watch movie） many goods, we（好突然来了一个we，一开始要说明谁和你一起） were hungry.
So we ate Pork Cutlet. It is very delicious. We come back （要加 to ）our dormitory.
Today is too tired （tired 是形容人, you need to use "tiring" for "today", 例如 Today is boring, I am too bored.）.
Correction: Today I woke up at 10 A.M. and then my friend and I went to a big market. It's too big!
After looking at many goods, we were hungry.
So we ate pork cutlets. They are very delicious.
Then we came back to our dormitory. Today was tiring.
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