fresh graduate
I am going to graduate from an university this year. However, because of some facts of family, I will enter the workforce and start working rather than keep studying. As a fresh graduate, the question which I meet the most now is " What kind of job do you want to do?"
When someone asks me, I will always say: " I have not known." And it's easy to find that regardless of the old or the young whose age is closed to me, people always look at me with an unbelievable eyes. I was embarrassed feeling like I do not have any dreams about my life. But after that, I feel more confused than embarrassed.
How long does it take for a person to know the job, industry, environment and have the required abilities? Only four years in the university?
In my opinion, " I have not known." doesn't mean having no idea for the future but mean having more encouragements than others to try and pursue my ideal and suitable job.
P.S. First, thank you correcting my article. And i will appreciate if you can pay more attention on my coherence, cohesion or some Chinglish in this article. :)
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fresh graduate
I am going to graduate from an university this year. However, because of some facts of family matters, I will enter the workforce and [it is repetitive to say "enter the workforce" and "start working"; "enter the workforce" is used in a more abstract, general way or in a formal context rather than in normal conversation when talking about yourself] start working rather than keep studying. As a fresh graduate, the question which I meet [you do not "meet" a question; avoid "which" in restrictive modifying clauses; instead use "that" or no word at all] I encounter the most now is " Wwhat kind of job do you want to do?"When someone asks me, I will always say: " I have not known I don't know yet." And it's easy to find see that regardless of whether they are the old or the young whose age is closed and close in age to me, people always look at me with an unbelievableunbelieving eyes. I was become embarrassed and start feeling like I do not have any dreams about for my life. But after that, I feel more confused than embarrassed.
How long does it take for a person to know the job they want, in what industry they want to work, and in what sort of environment, and to and have the required abilities? Only four years in the at university?
In my opinion, "I don't know yet I have not known." doesn't mean having no idea for the future but means having more encouragements motivation than others to try to find the job I am most ideally suited to and pursue my ideal and suitable job.
P.S. First, thank you for correcting my article. And i will appreciate if you can pay more attention on to itsmy coherence and any, cohesion or some Chinglish in this article. :)
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