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my expirience about hitchhiking I heard a lot from my friend about hitchhiking, how exited it is, fun, cheap. yesterdey I had to go to another city in 500 km by the train, but unfortunatly I was confused with the tickets, long story, finaly I didn`t go. and today I decided that it moment to take a ride on a random car. I was standing for an houer, it was raining, I had a huge back pack and noone took me. I think it was last time I am using hitchhiking.

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My expirience experiance about hitchhiking

I heard a lot from my friend about hitchhiking,. <-- There should have a period here.

How exited exciting it is, fun, cheap. yesterdey Yesterday I had to go to another city in 500 km by the train, but unfortunatly unfortunately I was confused with the tickets (Did you really have more than one ticket? If not, "a ticket" would be enough), long story,. finaly Finally, I didn`t go. and today Today, I decided that it moment to take a ride on a random car. I was standing for an houer hour, it was raining, I had a huge back pack and noone nobody took me.

If I were you, this would be my last statement - "I was standing and carrying a huge back pack for an hour. It was raining, but nobody minded to give me a ride."

I think it was the last time I am using hitchhiking.



1. There should be a capital letter when starting a new sentence.

2. You should separate sentences upon each idea.

3. Exciting is an adjective that means something is making you excited. In this case, hitchhiking is exciting, right?

4. A "I confused" should be find because it's already mentioning in a past tense. Using "was confused" makes it become a passive sentence, which it's not.

5. Mostly there're about vocabularies.

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