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<about cook and food>
1: I think we should try more new food in modren society. Because food is a major aspect of culture. When I was travelled to other cities . I would visit the places of interest and try the local food which my hometown was not as well.
2: I suppose it sure is the Japenese traditional food sushi. There are many sushi stalls outside of my school. My classmates and I really love it. I think it is popular in China ,mainly because it is tasty and cheap.
3:As for me, I really enjoy cooking . I am used to coking at home. It likes that the food I eat is clean and not too oily.On top of that, I can cook whatever I want. It is fun.
4:The expense is a little high in my coutry. Especially the breakfast. It usually cost 20 yuan with a bowl of noodles. And one of my friend told me ,in her hometown it is just cost her 4yuan on breakfast.So I think that is the reason why so many people choose to cook at home. It quick and cheap.
PS is there any better ideas for this?thank you^^
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Are these sentences correct?
1: I think we should try more new food in modern society[,] because food is a major aspect of culture. When I was travelled to other cities [,] I would visit the places of interest and try the local food which was not as good in my hometown.
2: I suppose it is certain that the sushi is a traditional Japanese food. There are many sushi stalls outside of my school. My classmates and I really love it. I think it is popular in China [] mainly because it is tasty and cheap.
3:As for me, I really enjoy cooking . I am used to coking at home. I prefer that the food I eat is clean and not too oily. On top of that, I can cook whatever I want. It is fun. I agree...I love cooking for myself, because like you say, it's clean. You have a better idea of what's actually in the food!
4:Expenses are a little high in my country. Especially for breakfast. It usually costs 20 yuan for a bowl of noodles. And one of my friends told me that in her hometown[,] breakfast only costs 4 yuan .So I think that is the reason why so many people choose to cook at home. It is quick and cheap.
PS are there any better ideas for how I can write these?thank you^^
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