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An email to my friend (informal)
Hi, Jose!
What about you? We don't talk haven't talked since the last month and I'd like to talk about the news that happened in this time.
I'm sure that you will be happy when you know I had a job interview the last week. It's fantastic, isn't it?
I thought that I had would never have an opportunity.
Firstly, when I arrived at the office there is a beautiful, young girl and she seemed was hungry angry(?). But, finally, she was very kind with me.
She asked me about my hobbies, my life style, my family, my career and so on.
Oh! With large amount of so much information I forgot tell you about the job, it's like a primary school teacher with little pupils. The subjects which I will teach are maths, science, history and art. I love these subjects!
I believe that I will have good luck! The other candidates had less formation training and experience than me.
My best wishes!
Very good Ana! My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.
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