persevere and effort
Today.I meet a cute girl on the italki.She is from Jepen.She can speak Chinese that very fluent.she was study by herself.That make me think my problem.
Five years ago.I began study Jepennese.I'm very effort.but i not persever.so i just study Jepennese 23days.
I am leaning English from my primary school.i am not interesting to English.so i am not effort to study English.Even though i persever study English it still bad.that's because i am not effor.
now I know.i should persever and effort.they are bother important.
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Perseverance and Effort
Today, I meet a cute girl on the italki. She is from Japan. She can speak Chinese very fluently. She learnt it by herself. That make me think of my problem.
Five years ago. I began studying Japanese. I put in a lot of effort, but I didn't persevere, so I only studied Japanese for 23 days.
I have been learning English since primary school. I am not very interested in English, so I don't make the effort to study English. Even though I persevere in studying English, I'm still not very good at it. That's because I don't put in a lot of effort.
Now I know. I should persevere and put in effort. They are both important.
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Remember to put a space after every comma and every fullstop. Capitalise the initial of the word after a fullstop.
The word "I" is always capitalised.
I hope that helps. Have a good day.
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