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If I had last year to live over again, I’d go at gym three times each week on Monday, Wednesday and Friday. And I’d take more seriously a lesion I have in my left foot. I got hurt during my last holiday in the Camino de Santiago (Way of St. James). It was last year, in June. Near a year ago. Then I thought it will get better only with de pass of the time. But after three months I must go to the physiotherapist because the pain is increased. He told me that de lesion was get chronic. He massaged my foot and told me to do exercises. Two months after, in December, I changed to another Physio because de situation isn’t getting better. Nowadays I’m preparing a new journey by foot. But I’m worry because I think the problem isn’t completely solved.
There is other thing I would like to do if I have an opportunity: to sail in a big boat. A sail boat, of course. I would like to sail for four or five days. Living day and night in the boat. With a lot of time for read a book or simply to be seeing the sea. A good place to visit could be Cerdeña or Menorca.
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Things to do
If I had last year to live over again, I’d go to the at gym three times each week, on Monday, Wednesday and Friday and I’d take more seriously an injury lesion I have in my left foot. I got hurt during my last holiday in the Camino de Santiago (Way of St. James). It was last year in June, nearly a year ago. At the time Then I thought it would will get better only with the de passage of the time. But after three months I had to must go to the physiotherapist because the pain had is increased. He told me that the de injury lesion was get chronic. He massaged my foot and told me to do exercises. Two months later after, in December, I changed to another Physio because the de situation wasn't isn’t getting better. Nowadays I’m preparing a new journey by foot. But I’m worried because I think the problem isn’t completely solved.There is other thing I would like to do if I have the an opportunity: to sail in a big boat. A sail boat, of course. I would like to sail for four or five days. Living day and night in the boat. With a lot of time to for read a book or simply to watch be seeing the sea. A good place to visit could be Cerdeña or Menorca.
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If I could relive last year, I’d go to the gym*1 three times each week on Monday, Wednesday and Friday. I’d take the lesion I have in my left foot much more seriously. I got hurt during my last holiday in the Camino de Santiago (Way of St. James). It was last year, in June. Nearly a year ago. Then I thought it would*2 get better only with the passing of the time. But after three months I had to go to the physiotherapist because the pain got worse*3. He told me that the lesion had become chronic. He massaged my foot and told me to do exercises. Two months after, in December, I changed to another Physio because the situation wasn't getting better. Nowadays I’m preparing for a new journey by foot. But I’m worried because I think the problem isn’t completely solved.There is another thing I would like to do if I were to have the opportunity: to sail in a big boat. A sail boat, of course. I would like to sail for four or five days. Living day and night on the boat. With a lot of time for reading or simply just seeing the sea. A good place to visit would be Cerdeña or Menorca.
Very well written piece! Good use of some very good vocab!
Suggestions for improvement:
de and the
Check your past and present tenses, see this site: https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/en/english-grammar/verbs/past-tense
*1 - use of at - see this website: http://www.eslgold.com/grammar/in_on_at.html
Also gym requires a definite article - you go to 'the gym'
*2 - see this website for the use of will and would https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/en/english-grammar/verbs/modal-verbs/will-or-would
*3 - In English when the pain increases we can say 'it gets worse' (it becomes more bad)
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If I had to relive last year, I’d go to the gym three times a week: on a Monday, Wednesday and Friday. Also, I’d take a lesion on my left foot more seriously. I got hurt during my last holiday in Camino de Santiago (Way of St. James). It was in June, nearly a year ago. I thought it would get better with time. But after three months I had to go to the physiotherapist because the pain had increased. He told me that the lesion had gotten chronic. He massaged my foot and told me to do exercises. Two months later, in December, I changed to another Physio because the situation wasn't getting better. Now, I’m preparing a new journey on foot. But I’m worried because I think the problem isn't completely better.There is another thing I would like to do if I have the opportunity: to sail in a big boat. A sail boat, of course. I would like to sail for four or five days, living in the boat day and night. There would be a lot of time for things like reading a book or simply watching the sea. A good place to visit could be Cerdeña or Menorca.
Really good writing, I understood all of what you wrote. Some of the things I've changed is to make it sound better in English. I would say just be careful with the past and the present tense. Sometimes you were describing things that happened in the past using the present tense. But apart from that really good!
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