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Hotel Room Reservation
Dear Hotel Shangri-La,To: Reservations Dept, Hotel Shangri-La
To whom it may concern:
I am* writing for reserve a single room from Jun 10 to Jun 12, 2016 on the non-smoking floor.
Name: Mr. Creed
Please send an attached Doc-File confirmation** to my e-mail address to confirm the reservation.
Thank you for you help. If there are any questions please feel free to reach out. contact me.
Best, Sincerely,***
Cara XXX {You would need a last name here also. Leaving just a first name is too informal.}
*Avoid using contractions in business correspondence whenever possible. It's informal.
**Or "Please send documentation to my email address to confirm."
***For business correspondence, the standard closure is "Sincerely" or "Regards".
Hotel room reservation
Dear Sir / Madam Hotel Shangri-La,I am writting for to reserve a single room [non-smoking*] from Jun 10 to Jun 12,Non-smoking floor.
in the name of Mr Creed
Please send confirmation (an attached Doc-File) to my e-mail address to confirm the reservation.
Thank you for you help.If there are you have any questions, please feel free to contact me reach out.
Best, Yours faithfully
Cara**
*there is probably no need to request a non-smoking room, as smoking is usually prohibited in hotel bedrooms
**give your full name and job title e.g. Cara Delevingne, Administrative Assistant
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