Please could anyone check this essay for CAE level. Thanks in advanced.
Topic:
Which aspect of daily life has been affected most by technology? 1) communication 2) relationships 3) working life
Task:
Write an essay discussing two of the points (220-260 words)
My essay
It’s nearly impossible as well as unfair to underestimate the role of technology and the benefits of the technological growth in our modern life. It has lead us to the new era, the one of possibilities and taking chances, the one where genuinely everyone can reckon on success due to current opportunities provided by the technological development. Thus, there’s nothing free as we know and everything has its price. So has the highly technologized contemporary world.
First of all, it’s worth mentioning that the technological progress literally managed to unite the entire world. There are no borders any longer at least in the other side of the computer screen, it has precisely become easier to share and interchange information as well as communicate anytime anywhere. On the other hand, this brought to the unnecessity of in person communication, so nowadays people do suffer the lack of it.
However, what really needs deep consideration is the relationships. Doubtlessly they have been affected the most. Although people stay in touch 24/7 they prefer being at home with some online affairs rather than going out and spending time face to face. Unfortunately, this is especially across-the-board with teenagers and young people. Once again we would just give a call than pay a visit to our family, friends or relatives.
It’s true that it has become easier to live but from another angle we see that people has become loners seeking for their inch of land under the sun sacrificing all they can and relationships go the first place in this list.
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