Travel to HongKong HongKong is a place with many parks and delicious food.Moreover,it’s a paradise of shopping. It’s in the morning when I get there.It had taken me about 3 hours to come there.It is a beautiful seaside city because there are many places of interest in it. The weather is good for trip.After lunch,we went to the HongKong Ocean Park.It’s built on both sides of the mountain.There are many people in the park that day.Mostly of them are tourist like me.I saw lots of sea creatures that day,such as shark,whale,devilfish and so on.it make me excited because I never saw them hitherto.When I walked around the park,the sun is down.And I went to eat a meal of seafood. That night,I walked to the peak to see the night scene of HongKong.It’s amazing.Many light were glitter.It seem the night was lighted up. The second day,I went to the Madame Tussaud's.The wax statue is living.And I took a lot of photograph with them. At last,I went shopping and bought many stuff I want.I feel satisfied for it.What a great trip! When I left HongKong,I thought that I feel like coming here one more. Could you replace the low-level sentence into the senior sentence.