随笔 Day 1

Though I have BEEN registered ON italki for a long time, I don't make full use of it. I just browse the website from time to time, and help Chinese learners correct their entries. So far, I only asked one question and started one discussion, which occurred a long time ago.  I used to ask people for advice, but seldom do it NOW.  I have to admit that there are so many ways to learn English, all I need to do is to try it and stick to it. So now I decideD to fully use this learning website to improve my English skillS,  and I will start BY writing English notebook entries.
Since it's my first time here to write a notebook entry, I think a daily ENRY is a good choice. Today our school held a big job fair for junior students so that they cOULD get internships FOR THE summer holiday.  Well, I also took part in it. It seems that big companies are always FILLED WITH people, and I am also one of them. I only submited my resume to three big companies that I am interested in. I found that finding an internship is VERY difficult, not to mention finding a formal job in due course. From this experience, I found that English is really very important in finding a job, and if you master a second foreign language that would be better. (By the way, my major is international trade.)Tonight my roommate received (GOT) a call from one of THE companies THAT SHE APPLIED TO. It sounded really good, though it's a small company.  I am a bit regretful now, maybe I should also HAVE TRIED those small companies. I don't know which one is better, A big company or A small company.

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