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The advice about education [letters for the English practice] Darling Hedwig, How are you? I hope that you are fine. I have not heard from you for ages! The reason I am writing this letter is an extremely significant element of your future. Is it the truth? Have you decided to refuse education after leaving school? Do you really want to sacrifice studying in favor of working? I have the bases to consider that an indoctrination is what you need in this period of the life. Surely, I respect you and your convictions, but it is a little difficult to understand such a weird choice of yours. In my opinion, this decision is not reasonable. And I can explain why in detail. Firstly, you willfully shorten the childhood. Please, think carefully: when else will you feel yourself comparably free? Secondly, persons without degrees are that kind of people for which it is fairly hard — to navigate in the modern world. Doubtless, you will want to continue specialized training, but your desire may be overdue. Beter sooner than later. Thirdly, it is the fact that education in our country is at no cost. As a result, instead of spending money, you receive quality and manifold! To avoid rows and conflicts in your family, to became a self-reliant, formed and honorable person, you have to study till the final victory. In the end, nobody could bother you to choose a form of learning that you could work as well as get education. For instance, I am going to combine studying and working. With the success! According to my letter context, I dare to hope that you will reconsider your decision and select the harsh, but obviously positive life path. I am waiting for your answer! Best regards, Genrietta.

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The Advice about Education [Letters for English Practice]

Darling Hedwig,
How are you? I hope that you are fine.
I have not heard from you for ages!

The reason I am writing this letter is an extremely significant element of your future. Is it the truth? Have you decided to refuse education after leaving school? Do you really want to sacrifice studying in favor of working? I have the bases to consider that an indoctrination is what you need in this period of the life. Surely, I respect you and your convictions, but it is a little difficult to understand such a weird choice of yours. In my opinion, this decision is not reasonable. And I can explain why in detail:

Firstly, you willfully shorten the childhood. Please, think carefully, when else will you feel yourself comparably free? Secondly, people without degrees are that kind of people for which it is fairly hard — to navigate in the modern world. Doubtless, you will want to continue specialized training, but your desire may be overdue. Better sooner than later! Thirdly, it is the fact that education in our country is at no cost. As a result, instead of spending money, you receive quality and manifold!

To avoid rows and conflicts in your family, to became a self-reliant, formed and honorable person, you have to study till the final victory. In the end, nobody could bother you to choose a form of learning that you could work as well as get education. For instance, I am going to combine studying and working, with success! According to my letter context, I dare to hope that you will reconsider your decision and select the harsh, but obviously positive life path.

I am waiting for your answer!
Best regards,
Genrietta
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