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My hometown (2nd time) I was born in Tianjin, Tianjin is my hometown. In the first thirty years of my life, l stayed in this city, and never left for more than two weeks. My primary school, middle school and college were all here, but they were gone. Buildings demolished by someone. But I still remember the day I entered the primary school for the first time , everything is so clear in my memory, just like it was happened yesterday. Life will go on. Everything is lost, anything is lost. I love my hometown, even if I can't find anything make me happy.

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My hometown (2nd time)

I was born in Tianjin. It is my hometown.
In the first thirty years of my life, l stayed in this city, and never left it for more than two weeks. My primary school, middle school and college were all there, but they are now gone. Buildings demolished by someone.
But I still remember the day I entered the primary school for the first time , everything is so clear in my memory, just like it happened yesterday.
Life will go on. Everything is lost, something is lost. I love my hometown, even if I can't find anything there to make me happy.

Very well written!

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