The dogs for me
Hello newly!!
Today I would like to talk about dogs.
I really love it! As I ser it dogs are a special animales.
They are happy always. They are good friends between other things.
They can't make you feel alone, also can be a guide if you don't see, they can find drugs, explosives and also missing people in desastres.
They are wonderfull, not only like a friend.
In spite of I am writing this I don't have dog currently. That's why My husband doesn't want to have a dog with a baby, and we have a baby, he is only 7 months old.
However, I don't give up still. In the future I will have a dog that I will rescue on the street. And he or she will be as important for me as I will be for his or her.
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The dogs for me /My opinion of dogs
Hello newly!!Today I would like to talk about dogs.
I really love them!, I see dogs as special animals
They are always happy
They can be company if you live alone, also they can be a guide if you are blind, they can find drugs, explosives and also missing people.
They are wonderful,
In spite of me writing this I don't have dog because my husband doesn't think that it is a good idea to have a dog while we have a baby, and we have a baby, he is only 7 months old.
However, I won't give up
You could also say. ''I will get a dog from a rescue centre''
Well done
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The dogs for me
Hello newly!!
Today I would like to talk about dogs.
I really love them! As I see it dogs are a special animals.
They are happy always. They are good friends, among other things.
They can stop you feeling lonely; they can also be a guide if you can't see, they can find drugs, explosives and also missing people in disasters.
They are wonderfull, not just as friends.
Even though I am writing this essay praising dogs, I don't have a dog currently. That is because my husband doesn't want to have a dog while we have a baby, and we have a baby; he is only 7 months old.
However, I'm not going to give up. In the future I will have a dog that I have rescued from the street. And he or she will be as important for me as I will be for him or her.
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Hi Ana. I've made some corrections. Grammar, puncuation and spelling corrections are marked in yellow, and phrasing adjustments are marked in blue. Vocabularly issues are marked in magenta.
I'm not sure what you meant when you said "newly".
I hope that helps, and have a good day!
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The dogs for me
Hello newly!!Today I would like to talk about dogs.
I really love it! (you jus wrote dogS, plural, therefore it should be them)
As I ser (see) it dogs are a special animales.(animals)
They are happy always (always happy). They are good friends between other things (they are kind to other things).
They can't make you feel alone, also can (delete)be a guide if you don't see, they can find drugs, explosives and also(delete) missing people in desastres (disaster).
They are wonderfull(wonderful), not only like(as) a friend.
In spite of I am writing this I don't have dog currently. That's why(because) My(my) husband doesn't want to have a dog (simultaneosly, without this word, it sounds like the dog has a baby)with a baby, and we have a baby, (delete (,) replace with (and))he is only 7 months old.
However, I don't give up still(delete). In the future I will have a dog that I will rescue on the street. And he or she will be as important for me as I will be for his(him) or her. (dog = it, not him or her)
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"Hello newly" is not an expression. We say "Hello again".
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