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job interview part 1 Good morning nice to meet you I’m Elena I’m from Milan. I’m in Ireland since December and I’m working as aupair because one of my target is learn English. Why it’s important for you learn English? • First of all because I think during these years a knowledge of English it’s for me part of basic culture so all people should speak English. • I like this language • I think is an important skill to find an interesting job • It’s important to travel What do you think about Ireland? Honest answer: Obviously I don’t like the weather indeed I prefer warmer temperature Cork I think is a nice city and the people are very friendly but I prefer bigger city for example I don’t like meet always people I know when I’m going around for the city. Liar answer: ohhhh I really like Ireland in particular Cork ( if the job is in cork) people are very friendly I have my volleyball team and many friends here and it’s a young city with always many interesting and funny events to meet new friends. I also like of cork there are people from different part of the world so there is the opportunity to discover something news about different cultures and there are also many Spanish so I’d like to learn Spanish too.

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job interview part 1

Good morning. Nice to meet you
My name is Elena from Milan.
I have been in Ireland since December, and I’m working as an aupair because one of my goals is to learn English.


Why is it important for one learn English?
• First of all because I think during these years a knowledge of English it’s for me part of basic culture so all people should speak English.
• I like this language.
• I think is an important skill to find an interesting job.
• It’s important for travel.
What do you think about Ireland?
Honest answer: Obviously I don’t like the weather indeed I prefer warmer temperature
Cork I think is a nice city and the people are very friendly but I prefer bigger city for example I don’t like meet always people I know when I’m going around for the city.
Liar answer: ohhhh I really like Ireland in particular Cork ( if the job is in cork) people are very friendly I have my volleyball team and many friends here and it’s a young city with always many interesting and funny events to meet new friends. I also like of cork there are people from different part of the world so there is the opportunity to discover something news about different cultures and there are also many Spanish so I’d like to learn Spanish too.

Feedback: There are a lot of run-on sentences. What is a run-on sentence? A run-on is a sentence in which two or more independent clauses (i.e. complete sentences) are joined without an appropriate punctuation or conjunction. So for example: It is nearly half past five we cannot reach town before dark. As well, there are a lot of contractions, which are considered informal to most employers. So, stay away from "it's", "they're", "I'm", etc. unless it's within conversation. 

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job interview part 1

Good morning. Nice to meet you
I’m Elena and I’m from Milan.
I have been in Ireland since December and I’m working as an Au Pair,  because one of my goals is to learn English.
Why is it important for me to learn English?
• First of all,  I think that it's important for everyone to speak English.
• I like this language
• I think it is an important skill to find an interesting job.
• It’s important for travelling.
What do I think about Ireland?
Honest answer: Obviously I don’t like the weather, because I prefer warmer temperatures.
I think Cork is a nice city and the people are very friendly, but I prefer a bigger city. For example, I don’t like to always meet people I know when I’m going around the city.
Liar! Here is the answer: Ohhhh I really like Ireland. In particular, I like Cork, ( if the job is in Cork) People are very friendly and I have my volleyball team and many friends here. It’s a youthful city with many interesting and fun activities to meet new friends. I also like that there are people from different parts of the world, so there is an opportunity to discover something new about different cultures. There are also many Spanish people,  so I’d like to learn Spanish too.
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job interview part 1

Good morning nice to meet you
I’m Elena I’m from Milan.
I’m in Ireland since December and I’m working as an au-pair because one of my dreams is to learn English.
Why is it important for you to learn English?
• First of all because I think these days a knowledge of English is a part of basic culture so all people should speak English.
• I like this language
• I think it is an important skill to find an interesting job
• It’s important to travel
What do you think about Ireland?
Honest answer: Obviously I don’t like the weather and indeed I prefer warmer temperatures.
Cork I think is a nice city and the people are very friendly but I prefer a bigger city, so for example, I don’t like always to meet people I already know when I’m going about the city.
Liar's answer: ohhhh I really like Ireland, in particular Cork ( if the job is in Cork). People are very friendly. I have my volleyball team and many friends here and it’s a young city with always many interesting and fun events to meet new friends. I also like that Cork is cosmopolitan so there is the opportunity to discover something new about different cultures and there are also many Spanish here so I’d like to learn Spanish too.

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job interview part 1

Good morning nice to meet you
I’m Elena I’m from Milan.
I’m in Ireland since December and I’m working as aupair because one of my targets is to learn English.
Why it’s important for you to learn English?
• First of all because I think during these years knowledge of English it’s for me a part of basic culture so all people should speak English.
• I like this language
• I think it is an important skill to find an interesting job
• It’s important to travel
What do you think about Ireland?
Honest answer: Obviously I don’t like the weather indeed I prefer warmer temperature
Cork I think is a nice city and the people are very friendly but I prefer bigger cities  for example I don’t like to always meet people I know when I’m going around for the city.
Liar answer: ohhhh I really like Ireland in particular Cork ( if the job is in cork) people are very friendly I have my volleyball team and many friends here and it’s a small city with always many interesting and funny events to meet new friends. I also like of cork that there are people from different parts of the world so there is the opportunity to discover something new about different cultures and there are also many Spanish so I’d like to learn Spanish too.

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