sunny's notebook entry: Jun 17, 2010
Yesterday is the Chinese Dragon Boat Festival ,I have gone home in Jun 15.The first i am shoping with my brother, We bought many foods including lizhi,Yogurt,and KFC ...... Knowing this week's sunday is father' festival,we bought a t-shirt to my dear father!
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sunny's notebook entry: Jun 17, 2010
Yesterday{"was" is the past tense of "is". you should use "was" since it was yesterday, a past...saying "many foods" is a bit weird. so it should be "a lot of food". yogurt is a common noun which doesnt need to be capitalized. only proper nouns need to be capitalized, like Sunday. "festival" is actually a period or program of festive activities, cultural activities, or entertainment. we call most of our holidays, simply "day"....}
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