Essay 9 - When I am getting old
Today I want to talk something about future: WHEN I AM GETTING OLD.
Recently, I have a strong feeling.
I feel that the time flies fast like an arrow. I can’t keep up with the pace of time. There are so many things that I haven’t done. And I didn’t make a lot of progress in the past days.
This situation forces me to think about my future more. I keep thinking “what would I like when I am getting old?”
When I was young, I wanted to be a teacher, I thought this is a respectable job. Every student is glad to listen to their teachers. But for now, I hope I can be a designer when I am getting old. But this is a challenging for me. I can’t get it at this moment or get it very soon. I need to learn many things. I need to broaden my view vision, to feel the beauty and fashion of everything. Then I need to discover my own aesthetics and ideas. In order to achieve these, I need more time.
I hope that I can have a big house when I am getting old. The house has many rooms, whether my family or my friends come, they can stay at my home. In the garden, we can plant trees and all kinds of flowers. You can find a lively plant no matter which season.
In my opinion, house is a basic thing of stable life. It would be much better if you can have a house. However, it doesn’t mean if you don’t have a house, you will not have a happy life.
I should travel a lot of places when I am getting old. I like the feeling of on the ways. It’s a good experience to travel alone but so far I have never done it. I am a little afraid of that. But it is one thing that I am going to do. Also, I want to find a partner that we have common values and interests. We can travel lots of places together. Sometimes, the meaning of travel will not only depend on the views, but also depend on who will be with you.
Life is a process to make you experience different things. Whether life is wonderful or not. It depends on your attitude. Live in the moment, love it and enjoy it.
When I am getting old. I will not feel regret for the past time.
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 3
0
I should travel to a lot of places when I am getting old get older. I like the feeling of on the ways being on the move. It’s a good experience to travel alone but so far I have never done it. I am a little afraid of that. But it is one thing that I am going to do. Also, I want to find a partner that we have I share common values and interests with. We can travel to lots of places together. Sometimes, the meaning of travel will not only depend on the views sights, but also depend on who will be with you.
Life is a process to make you experience different things. Whether life is wonderful or not. It depends on your attitude. Live in the moment, love it and enjoy it.
When I am getting old get older, I will not feel regret for the past time.
Well said!
0
Essay 9 - When I am getting old get older
Today I want to talk something about the future: WHEN I AM GETTING OLD GET OLDER.Recently, I have had a strong feeling.
I feel that the time flies fast like an arrow. I can’t keep up with the pace of time. There are so many things that I haven’t done. And I didn’t make haven't made a lot of progress in the past few days. [The present perfect tense is used here because the action began in the past and still continues to the present.]
This situation forces me to think about my future more. I keep thinking “what would I like when I am getting old get older?”
When I was young, I wanted to be a teacher, I thought this is was a respectable job. Every student is glad to listen to their teachers. But for now, I hope I can be a designer when I am getting old get older. But this is a challenging for me. I can’t get achieve it at this moment or get achieve it very soon. I need to learn many things. I need to broaden my view vision [or "broaden my vision"], to feel the beauty and fashion style of everything. Then I need to discover my own aesthetics and ideas. In order to achieve these, I need more time.
I hope that I can have a big house when I am getting old get older. The house has would have many rooms, and whether my family or my friends come came to visit, they can could stay at my home. In the garden, we can could plant trees and all kinds of flowers. You can could find a lively plant no matter which season.
In my opinion, a house is a basic thing aspect of a stable life. It would be much better if you can could have a house. However, it doesn’t mean that if you don’t have a house, you will not have a happy life.
[I'm running out of space, so I'll correct the rest of the text in another comment. :-)]
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
