The best day of my life ( writing for homework)

It was a bright, clear Monday afternoon at the bus station and I was with my best friend Giselle. We were waiting anxiously for the bus, while we were talking about our first trip to the exotic country of Brazil. We had the tickets in our hands and our bags were full and heavy, but we didn't mind. don't matter. As soon as the bus arrived, we ran quickly onto the bus to have the best seats. We stayed in a huge, incredible camp located in Porto Alegre. Our first visit was to a place called Gramado and Canela, I remembered this place with such a joy, because I spent a lot of pleasing moments with my friends at the shopping mall, and walking through  along the pedestrian street that was full of trendy shops, galleries, and elegant restaurants . The attractive houses reminded me to of Swiss and German dwellings. We took lots of photos, and we will always remembered this time. Have you ever wondered how it would be to go on  for a trip with a friend? I recommend this to everyone I know because it's an amazing and enlightening broaden experience. You can learn deeply one  a lot from one the another, and that's a benefit for you both as you create a strongest (the strongest) relationship.

The best day of my life ( writing for homework)

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