Now, p.m. 11 .
It's 11 p.m. now.

I'm watching TV and I will play game now. 
I'm watching TV and am going to play a game. || I'm watching TV and playing a game.

This game is 'tekken' . 
The game is called Tekken. || It's called Tekken. || I'm playing Tekken.

I like this charactor Ling Xaoyu .
I like this character. Her name is Ling Xiaoyu.

She is Chinese girl who is very cute. 
She is a Chinese girl who is very cute. || She is a very cute Chinese girl.

Her pet Panda is cute, too.
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I'm sleepy...

Now, p.m. It's 11 now.
I'm watching TV and I will play a game called 'Tekken'  now.
This game is 'tekken' .
I like this the  charactor, Ling Xaoyu .
She is a Chinese girl who is very cute.
Her pet Panda is cute, too.

I'm sleepy...