Save a life
This is my lyrics, please help me to correct it, I'll be thankful! :)
Please, tell me how to save a life!
When the fire burns, when the people scream
You sit in the corner and cry
Where is your mom? And where is your dad?
Your brave brother became a soldier
Tell him not to shake hands, don't be afraid to face the truth
Tell him to fight for free
You are such a kind person who never lose your temper
But when your bro fell down on the ground
You yelled like a crazy monster
The explosions covered your little voice
You knelt down on the ground
Held your hands to the sky---
Please, tell me how to save a life?
The sky is bleeding
The blood covers everywhere
You and I hate the red colour
You say, I just wanna have a peaceful life
Where is the safe? Where is the peace?
Where are the civil rights?
You hear the cry everywhere
Why are you crying so sad?
Where is your mom, and where is your dad?
Let us mourn for your brave bro
Hold our hands to the sky---
Please, tell me how to save a life?
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Save a life
This is my lyrics, please help me to correct it, I'll be thankful! :)Please, tell me how to save a life!
When the fire burns, when the people scream
You sit in the corner and cry
Where is your mom? And where is your dad?
Your brave brother became a soldier
Tell him not to shake hands, don't be afraid to face the truth
Tell him to fight for freedom
You are such a kind person who never loses your temper
But when your brother fell down on the ground
You yelled like a crazy monster
The explosions covered your little voice
You knelt down on the ground
Held your hands to the sky---
Please, tell me how to save a life?
The sky is bleeding
The blood covers everything
You and I hate the red colour
You say, I just wanna have a peaceful life
Where is the safety? Where is the peace?
Where are the civil rights?
You hear the cries everywhere
Why are you crying so sad?
Where is your mom, and where is your dad?
Let us mourn for your brave brother
Hold our hands to the sky---
Please, tell me how to save a life?
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