A sunny day
It's a beautiful, sunny day here, but it's also scorching outside.
I don't know if the sunshine is strawberry-scented,
if not, why should I walk into the scalding heat out there?
I don't want to schlep my heavy legs around the town like a schmuck,
I'd rather stay at home.
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A sunny day
It's a beautiful, sunny day here, but it's also scorching outside.I don't know if the sunshine is strawberry-scented,
if not, why should I walk into the scalding heat out there?
I don't want to schlep my heavy legs around the town like a schmuck,
I'd rather stay at home.
This short passage is excellently written, I love this creative 'strawberry-scented'.
Personally I would say that you need to add more to this.
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A sunny day
It's a beautiful, sunny day here, but it's also scorching outside.I don't know if the sunshine is strawberry-scented,
if not, why should I walk into the scalding heat out there?
I don't want to schlep my heavy legs around the town like a schmuck,
I'd rather stay at home.
This short passage is excellently written, I love this creative 'strawberry-scented'.
Personally I would say that you need to add more to this.
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