Can the Polish abortion ban project turn lives of women into the hell?
In Polish legislation there is one of the most strict abortion law in whole Europe. It allows women to abort a fetus only in case of rape and really dangerous mother‘s or child’s illness. Nevertheless, the situation was quite calm and people got used to actual anti-abortial law that is in force already 27 years. However, everything has changed since the Law and Justice party ( in Poland known as PiS) was elected in October 2015 according to Zofia Reych, the author of the article „A Polish abortion ban would turn women back into childbearing instruments“ published in „The Guardian“ on 8 April 2016.
The currect law was introduced in year 1993 under a big presure of the Catholic Church, 4 years after the end of comunismus . It has been called as „abortion compromise“. Although the abortion rate has been really low, it does not mean that there are no abortions. The abortion underground is getting bigger and bigger. In addition, plenty of Polish women is going abroad to stop their pregnancy, mostly to Czech Republic, Germany and Slowakia. In my opinion, women should be able to make their own decision about their life and body. I think that the only way to reduce the number of abortions is to educate properly teenagers about anticonception and make them ready for being responsible parents.
The new project is going to protect the life of an unborn child in all situation, even if the health of his mother would be in a big danger. In his article Zofia Reych is writing about her Polish friend who is gone to Slovakia in case of abortion. After coming home, she became much pain. „She realised that if she went to the hospital the doctor could notify the police. Fortunately, the pain subsided and her fear wasn’t put to the test.“ Living in the fear is hard truth of daily life for many Polish women. In my opinion to protect lives of citizens should be the main point for the government.
In summary, I would like to remind that the women rights are a big achievement of our civilization. I find the actual situation in Poland as goinf one hundred years back in the history. Not to forget is the fact that human rights are given after the birth, so always the life of the mother should be much more protected as the life of the fetus.
I would be glad if you help me to correct my essay. It would be better when I use more linking words, like however, therefore and more formal language. Thank you so much !!! :) Cheers!
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In Polish legislation, there is one of the strictest abortion laws in the whole Europe. It only allows women to abort a fetus in case of rape and really dangerous mother‘s or child’s illness. Surprisingly, the situation was quite calm and people got used to the actual anti-abortion law that has been in force already for 27 years. Nevertheless, everything has changed since the Law and Justice party ( in Poland known as PiS) was elected in October 2015 according to Zofia Reych, the author of the article „A Polish abortion ban would turn women back into childbearing instruments“ published in „The Guardian“ on 8 April 2016.
The current law was introduced in the year 1993 under a huge pressure of the Catholic Church, 4 years after the end of communism. It has been called as „abortion compromise“. Although the abortion rate has been really low, it does not mean that there are no abortions.In fact, The underground abortion problem is getting bigger and bigger. In addition, plenty of Polish women go abroad to stop their pregnancy, mostly to the Czech Republic, Germany and Slovakia. In my opinion, women should be able to make their own decision about their own life and body. I think that the only way to reduce the number of abortions is to educate teenagers properly about anticonception and make them ready for being responsible parents.
The new project is going to protect the life of an unborn child in all situation, even if the health of his mother would be in a big danger. In his article, Zofia Reych is writing about her Polish friend who is gone to Slovakia in case of abortion. After coming home, she became in much pain. „She realised that if she went to the hospital the doctor could notify the police. Fortunately, the pain subsided and her fear wasn’t put to the test.“ Living in the fear is a hard truth of daily life for many Polish women. In my opinion to protect lives of citizens should be the main point for the government.
In summary, I would like to remind that the women's rights are a big achievement of our civilization. I find the actual situation in Poland as going one hundred years back in the history. Not to forget is the fact that human rights are given after the birth, so always the life of the mother should be much more protected as the life of the fetus.
I would be glad if you help me to correct my essay. It would be better when I use more linking words, like however, therefore and more formal language. Thank you so much !!! :) Cheers!
The current law was introduced in the year 1993 under a huge pressure of the Catholic Church, 4 years after the end of communism. It has been called as „abortion compromise“. Although the abortion rate has been really low, it does not mean that there are no abortions.In fact, The underground abortion problem is getting bigger and bigger. In addition, plenty of Polish women go abroad to stop their pregnancy, mostly to the Czech Republic, Germany and Slovakia. In my opinion, women should be able to make their own decision about their own life and body. I think that the only way to reduce the number of abortions is to educate teenagers properly about anticonception and make them ready for being responsible parents.
The new project is going to protect the life of an unborn child in all situation, even if the health of his mother would be in a big danger. In his article, Zofia Reych is writing about her Polish friend who is gone to Slovakia in case of abortion. After coming home, she became in much pain. „She realised that if she went to the hospital the doctor could notify the police. Fortunately, the pain subsided and her fear wasn’t put to the test.“ Living in the fear is a hard truth of daily life for many Polish women. In my opinion to protect lives of citizens should be the main point for the government.
In summary, I would like to remind that the women's rights are a big achievement of our civilization. I find the actual situation in Poland as going one hundred years back in the history. Not to forget is the fact that human rights are given after the birth, so always the life of the mother should be much more protected as the life of the fetus.
I would be glad if you help me to correct my essay. It would be better when I use more linking words, like however, therefore and more formal language. Thank you so much !!! :) Cheers!
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