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Composition You have been asked to write a short composition as part of your English course with the following title: “Woman receives letter mailed 30 years ago” Who was involved? It was a letter which was writing by her father. Just knew the truth he and her mother. He wanted she recived it after his death. When and where did it happen? It happened when she was 5 month, in a cul de sac but the letter was written on a summer afternoon in their house of the beach. Why did it happen? It happened because he wanted to protect her. She was a baby and needed anyone who will be able to bring her up. He couldn't leave her else she had deaded. She was dirty and besides smelled bad, she didn't have strenght to scream. What was the final result? She read that letter. She is happy, she knew everythings and she has understood that without helping of her father, she wouldn't be alive.

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Composition

You have been asked to write a short composition as part of your English course with the following
title: “Woman receives letter mailed 30 years ago”


Who was involved?
It was a letter which was written by her father. She only knew the truth from what her father and mother told her. He wanted her to receive it after his death.

When and where did it happen?
It happened when she was 5 months old in a cul de sac but the letter was written on a summer afternoon in their house of the beach.

Why did it happen?
It happened because he wanted to protect her. She was a baby and needed someone who will be able to bring her up. He couldn't leave her otherwise she would have died. She was dirty and smelt bad, she didn't have strength to scream.

What was the final result?
She read that letter. She was happy and she knew everything. She understood that without the help of her father, she wouldn't be alive.

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