OPINION ARTICLE, PART II (suggestions are welcome)
THE PLANET NEED OUR HELP
In our day to day, we all can take steps to reduce pollution. We have to teach children how to sort rubbish into different materials. Recycling is vital to avoid wastes. Moreover, energy-efficient light bulbs can be used at home. The more energy we save, the less damage we cause in our environment. Besides this, avoiding the taps drip/ leak and maintaining all our devices unplug / switch off when it is not used for a long time, it help us to reduce our spends.
Contrary to popular belief, some people think that fuel fossil fuel energies are limitless and everlasting, so that we don’t have reasons to be concerned about it. I totally disagree with that view, as I believe that fossil fuel must be rejected or set aside in favour of wind farms, biomass, bio fuels or tidal energy.
To sum up, it is about time we aware of the fragility/ frailty of our planet, if we want to follow developing a modern society.
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OPINION ARTICLE, PART II (suggestions are welcome)
THE PLANET NEED OUR HELPIn our day to day life, we all can take steps to reduce pollution. We have to teach children how to sort rubbish into different materials. Recycling is vital to avoid wastes. Moreover, energy efficient light bulbs can be used at home. The more energy we save, the less damage we cause to in our environment. Besides this, fixing dripping faucets avoiding the taps drip/ leak and keeping maintaining all our devices unplugged / switched off when they are it is not being used for a long time, it helps us to reduce our energy consumption spends.
Contrary to popular belief, some people think that fuel fossil fuel energies are limitless and everlasting, so that we don’t need have reasons to be concerned about it. I totally disagree with that view, as I believe that fossil fuel must be rejected or set aside in favour of wind farms, biomass, bio fuels or tidal energy.
To sum up, it is about time that we become aware of the fragility/ frailty of our planet, if we want to continue follow developing a modern society.
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OPINION ARTICLE, PART II (suggestions are welcome)
THE PLANET NEED OUR HELP
In our day to day life we all can all take steps to reduce pollution. We have to teach children how to sort rubbish into different materials. Recycling is vital to avoid waste (singular). Moreover, energy-efficient light bulbs can be used at home. The more energy we save, the less damage we cause in the environment. Besides this, make sure that taps dont drip and maintaining all our unplug devices when they are not going to be used for a long time, which also helps us to reduce our bills.
Contrary to popular belief, some people think that fuel fossil fuel energies are limitless and everlasting, so that we don’t have reasons to be concerned about it. I totally disagree with that view, as I believe that fossil fuel must be rejected or set aside in favour of wind farms, biomass, bio fuels or tidal energy.
To sum up, it is about time we aware of the fragility of our planet, if we want to follow developing a modern society.
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