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The Scottish cycling holiday [letters for the English practice] Dearest Etain! How are you? I hope you are very well. I have not heard from you for ages. Consequently, I am so happy that I have received a letter from you! I am writing to you to approve your invitation. I am glad to receive this offer. Thank you a lot! Definitely, it is a great idea to have a Scottish cycling holiday with you, my dear comrade. Your proposal is engaging for me. In fact, I am absolutely exhausted in recent times, therefore, a rest can be a healing pastime. In addition, I like your company and cycling as well as Scottish. (I fervently dream to visit this fantastic country!) We need to organize our cycling holiday. What about tickets, accommodation and food? I can take care of routine items of our rest. And even do not think to be disagree! I wish to do this. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, Eithne.

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The Scottish cycling holiday [letters for the English practice]

Dearest Etain!
How are you? I hope you are well.
I have not heard from you for ages, so I am very happy to have received a letter from you!

I am writing to you to accept your invitation. I am so pleased to receive this offer. Thanks a lot!  A Scottish cycling holiday with you is a great idea, my dear friend.

Your proposal is just what I need.   Recently, I have been absolutely exhausted, so a rest is an appealing proposition. In addition, I like your company and cycling as well as Scotland. (I have always dreamt of visiting this fantastic country!)

We need to organize our cycling holiday. What about tickets, accommodation and food? I can take care of routine items of our rest. And even do not think to be disagree! I wish to do this. 

I look forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Eithne.

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The Scottish cycling holiday [letters for the English practice]

Dearest Etain!
How are you? I hope you are very well.
I have not heard from you for ages. Consequently,(that's why) I am so happy that I have received a letter from you!

I am writing to you to approve accept your invitation. I am glad to have received this offer. Thank you a lot! Definitely, it is definitely a great idea to have a Scottish cycling holiday with you, my dear comrade.

Your proposal(idea) is sounds engaging for to me. In fact, I am have been absolutely exhausted recently in recent times, therefore, a little rest can be a healing pastime(good thing). In addition, I like your company and cycling, as well as the Scottish. (I fervently dream to visit  (I have always dreamt of visiting) this fantastic country!)

We need to organize our cycling holiday. What about tickets, accommodation and food? I can take care of routine items of our rest. And even do not think to be disagree! don't even try to tell me not to worry. I wish(want) to do this.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Eithne.


(Grammatically your English was beautiful, but a bit formal. I changed somethings for flow and grammar in violet. This sounds like a letter to a friend so I have highlighted these very formal phrases in Green and options are in parenthesis)

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