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A letter sent to professor(not the real name) Today I sent a letter to my professor, could u pls help me revising it more idiomatic Dear Prof.Dr.Tommas, My name is Tom, I'm a exchange student and my Matriculation Number is: 111111. I attended the Mundlich Prufung at 11:40 o'clock AM 12.05.2016.Thank you very much for your patient and I appreciate su much that you let me pass the exam. Now I'm preparing for coming back to china, so could you please put the fixed grade onto the system and I can get the transcript immediately. Thank you very much. Sincerely Tom

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A letter sent to professor(not the real name)

Today I sent a letter to my professor, could u pls help me revising it more idiomatic

Dear Prof.Dr.Tommas,

My name is Tom. I'm a exchange student and my Matriculation Number is: 111111. I attended the Mundlich Prufung at 11:40 o'clock AM 12.05.2016.Thank you very much for your patient patience and I appreciate su much that you let letting me pass  take * the exam. Now I'm preparing for coming back to china, to go back to China**,  so could you please put  post the fixed  final grade onto  into the system and so I can get the transcript immediately.

Thank you very much.

Sincerely
Tom

NOTES: 

*"To pass an exam" is to score a sufficient grade on a test, after you have taken it.

**China, like the names of all countries, cities and people, requires a capital leter.

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